[Turnsky]

Okay since the previous foxfire thread is getting a little large (thanks mostly to yours truly:D ) i kinda figured  that'd be a good idea to put the old thread to rest and start a new one for a new chapter in the story (the first four pages were a prologue)..
(wouldn't mind this stickified and the other thread de-stickified)
Here we go..(56k'rs be dammed)

[Stryke 9]

Now, let's start this off right, with a post by me...



Hmm. You're getting a lot better as you go along. Looks pretty cool now, at the beginning it was kinda cartoonish- which made me wonder how you were gonna work in all the "dark" bits you obviously have planned without looking odd.

Anyway, he seems awfully worked up over such a little thing. Hell, I'm abducted by evil scientists, I'm gonna be pretty happy if I don't wake up with skinless, evil snakes that try to bite me for arms, or all my organs removed and put somewhere they don't belong.

[Turnsky]

hey i draw, not write...

[J.F.K.]

Stryke's right, your style is definitely developing. Me likes. (Nice rain, btw.)

[Gortef]

Ok you fixed the "glow problem" on the cover page, good good.
And otherwise it looks exellent again

(yep the rain is nice)

[Martinus]

[color=66ff00]Sticky this thread, unsticky old one?

BTW tres good.
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[Cannikin]

Hmmmm... He seems to catch on very quick that he has been changed into a furry and acts as if it's his worst nightmare come true. He got furry-phobia?

If I were him and saw a furry paw with claws instead of a hand I would just be like for a couple minutes.

[Nico]

yeah, I think he grasps the situation way too quickly...

[kasperl]

Originally posted by Cannikin
Hmmmm... He seems to catch on very quick that he has been changed into a furry and acts as if it's his worst nightmare come true. He got furry-phobia?

If I were him and saw a furry paw with claws instead of a hand I would just be like for a couple minutes.

depends on how many bad SF movies you've seen. if i'd wake up with funny skin, i'dcheck a mirror, if noe were availavble and i was in a strange, unknown place, i'd just go "o crap, why does this happen to me?"

[Martinus]

Originally posted by Venom
yeah, I think he grasps the situation way too quickly...

[color=66ff00]Perhaps he's already went through this in a dream or it's happened to him before???
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[Stryke 9]

I think then it would be more a "Oh, crap. Not again!" sorta thing.


Which, you'd have to admit, would be a fantastic line for there.

[Turnsky]

Originally posted by Maeglamor
[color=66ff00]Sticky this thread, unsticky old one?

BTW tres good.
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yep

As for the rain, i used a combination of glitterato, difference clouds, noise with motion blur and a massive tweaking of levels to get it to look right..(on multiple layers of course.)

and thanks guys..

and stryke9, if you want to pick holes, please direct them to Blue lion;)  he writes these things...

EDIT: Thanks Maeg..

[Blue Lion]

What do you want? A 6 page panel of him staring at his hands?

[Turnsky]

hell strkye9, even you could do that:p

*copy - paste*
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[Stryke 9]

[sets Turnsky on fire]

Actually, I was thinking more the mirror thing. Something where it takes him a bit, and it doesn't look like he's overreacting based on a glance at his fingers. But whatever, it's fine.

[Turnsky]

*rolls across ground*
*gets up and dusts himself off*

thank god i fireproofed my shirt..

well stryke9, he can see  his canine-like nose from his POV, one should think he'd assume what he'd look like;)

[Stryke 9]

Eh, I'll buy that.

[pulls out the electric razor]

[Turnsky]

also another thing...

according to him, it's only the next day..

[Turnsky]

Originally posted by J.F.K.
Stryke's right, your style is definitely developing. Me likes. (Nice rain, btw.)

i can still do it old-style;)
http://www.deviantart.com/view/2147008

[Stryke 9]

Hmm...

That is a truly disturbing site. I have to go wash my eyeballs now, I was stupid and clicked a link.


Er, uh, yeah, that's something like your old stuff.