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Off-Topic Discussion => Arts & Talents => Topic started by: jdjtcagle on April 04, 2004, 03:50:54 pm

Title: More Art...
Post by: jdjtcagle on April 04, 2004, 03:50:54 pm

Give me opinions on this to improve my art with.
This really sucks compared to the ones I have seen, but tell me what you think

(http://www.fattonys.com/images/upload/img223.jpg)

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:D

Title: More Art...
Post by: kasperl on April 05, 2004, 04:54:05 am

the face is a bit too thick, and the shadow at the nose is a bit, odd.

also, the eyes and eyebrows look, odd.

Title: More Art...
Post by: jdjtcagle on April 05, 2004, 08:30:19 am

hmmm....
What about the hair?? :p

Title: More Art...
Post by: kasperl on April 05, 2004, 08:45:17 am

i can tell you from experience (i have long hair) that it won't flare up like that.....
unless there is a fan directly under her, the hair would always go to one side.

also, the locks on the right back side are to thick, the points should be tinner.

Title: More Art...
Post by: jdjtcagle on April 05, 2004, 06:29:26 pm

ahhh screw it, it sucks :p  I'll try harder:)

Title: More Art...
Post by: Ulala on April 06, 2004, 01:42:40 am

hey man, no worries, because no matter what, you'll always be better than me! ;) Keep it up, my friend who draws tells me it's a lot of practice practice practice.

[edit] post 300, w00t! I guess I don't post very often... I just read a lot... [/edit]