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Offline Turnsky

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The Foxfire Chronicles Chapter 2: Part 1
okay, i'm planning for chapter 2 of foxfire, and well, i need a favor or two..  below is a sketch of the cover, it's a WIP.



two things
1) i need an opinion of the harrier in the background, 'cua i can't draw vehicles worth crackers these days :p
2) i need a latin translation for something along the lines of "Chained Freedom"
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chained freedom.

lemme look chained up.
just another newbie without any modding, FREDding or real programming experience

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The Foxfire Chronicles Chapter 2: Part 1
libertas retentum seems to be Freedom is being chained, and it's the closest you're gonna get with my knowledge.
just another newbie without any modding, FREDding or real programming experience

you haven't learned masochism until you've tried to read a Microsoft help file.  -- Goober5000
I've got 2 drug-addict syblings and one alcoholic whore. And I'm a ****ing sociopath --an0n
You cannot defeat Windows through strength alone. Only patience, a lot of good luck, and a sledgehammer will do the job. --StratComm

 

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The Foxfire Chronicles Chapter 2: Part 1
Couldn't find anything for "chained" but here's "freedom" libertas
I have big plans, now if only I could see them through.

LiberCapacitas duo quiasemper
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The Foxfire Chronicles Chapter 2: Part 1
I was thinking about words that could mean what chained means. I thought of bondage "ligatio"


[EDIT]the thing I'm using http://www.freedict.com/onldict/lat.html
I have big plans, now if only I could see them through.

LiberCapacitas duo quiasemper
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Nav buoy - They mark things

 

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The Foxfire Chronicles Chapter 2: Part 1
Bondage :wtf:
Foxfire hasn't enough F's to be a pr0n movie yet :p
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The jet looks all right, near as I can tell given the extremely vague sketch of it- that assault rifle is huge. Slim it down, a lot.

Hmm, light infantry versus air force, that'll be interesting... The little squishies go BOOM! :D

 

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Originally posted by RoachKoach
Bondage :wtf:
Foxfire hasn't enough F's to be a pr0n movie yet :p
uhhh....k

fetter     vinculum
fetters.     catena
I have big plans, now if only I could see them through.

LiberCapacitas duo quiasemper
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Nav buoy - They mark things

  

Offline Stryke 9

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Yeah, RoachKoach's post scares me, too. I think the best thing for all involved would be to pretend it doesn't exist.

 

Offline Turnsky

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Originally posted by Stryke 9
The jet looks all right, near as I can tell given the extremely vague sketch of it- that assault rifle is huge. Slim it down, a lot.

Hmm, light infantry versus air force, that'll be interesting... The little squishies go BOOM! :D


"this little bomby blows the cockpit off, this little bomby..."
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Offline Stryke 9

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Bombs? Um, how many times the speed of sound are these "bombs" traveling at? :p

 

Offline Turnsky

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Bombs? Um, how many times the speed of sound are these "bombs" traveling at? :p

:lol: point
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Offline Raptor

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The Foxfire Chronicles Chapter 2: Part 1
The harrier looks okay overall, it just needs the cockpit canopy raised a bit more, to be a more pronounced bubble.  And round off the end of it (the canopy) - there is no straight edge on the outside.

Not sure if the tail-planes would be visible or not from this angle...:doubt:
...There ought to be something surreal about a Zoid offering romantic advice...and yet there is not. It seems perfectly normal that the Liger is giving Bit advice on relationships, and it shouldn't, but it does. Dangit man, you've confused me again.[/I]
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