[jdjtcagle]

Give me opinions on this to improve my art with.
This really sucks compared to the ones I have seen, but tell me what you think



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[kasperl]

the face is a bit too thick, and the shadow at the nose is a bit, odd.

also, the eyes and eyebrows look, odd.

[jdjtcagle]

hmmm....
What about the hair??

[kasperl]

i can tell you from experience (i have long hair) that it won't flare up like that.....
unless there is a fan directly under her, the hair would always go to one side.

also, the locks on the right back side are to thick, the points should be tinner.

[jdjtcagle]

ahhh screw it, it sucks  I'll try harder:)

[Ulala]

hey man, no worries, because no matter what, you'll always be better than me! Keep it up, my friend who draws tells me it's a lot of practice practice practice.

[edit] post 300, w00t! I guess I don't post very often... I just read a lot... [/edit]