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Offline WeatherOp

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The goodness continues.:D
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dun-dun-dun.....


awesome work yet again :yes:
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:lol: This is great! I'm ashamed that I missed this until now!

You have a very obvious talent at building suspense and intrigue, UT. Wonderful writing :)
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Blind people with them..."

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*ka-chink*

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"...The quintessential quality of our age is that of dreams coming true. Just think of it. For centuries we have dreamt of flying; recently we made that come true: we have always hankered for speed; now we have speeds greater than we can stand: we wanted to speak to far parts of the Earth; we can: we wanted to explore the sea bottom; we have: and so  on, and so on: and, too, we wanted the power to smash our enemies utterly; we have it. If we had truly wanted peace, we should have had that as well. But true peace has never been one of the genuine dreams - we have got little further than preaching against war in order to appease our consciences. The truly wishful dreams, the many-minded dreams are now irresistible - they become facts." - 'The Outward Urge' by John Wyndham

"The very essence of tolerance rests on the fact that we have to be intolerant of intolerance. Stretching right back to Kant, through the Frankfurt School and up to today, liberalism means that we can do anything we like as long as we don't hurt others. This means that if we are tolerant of others' intolerance - especially when that intolerance is a call for genocide - then all we are doing is allowing that intolerance to flourish, and allowing the violence that will spring from that intolerance to continue unabated." - Bren Carlill

 

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It's baaaaaaaaack!!
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Mal: Define "interesting".
Wash: *shrug* "Oh God, oh God, we're all gonna die"?
Mal: This is the captain. We have a little problem with our entry sequence, so we may experience some slight turbulence and then... explode.

 

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ah, no, i thought i'd kicked the habit, but then you had to write another fix! dude, keep up the supply!
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Offline Unknown Target

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Sorry it took so long. I've been having a lot of RL issues lately, and it's been slowing down my work in pretty much everything :)


SCENE EIGHTY TWO. INT. FORUM READY ROOM – DAY.

SHRIKE is standing amidst the now-empty boxes, his hands on his hips and a furious expression contorting his face. NICO is standing next to him, holding a clipboard stacked with red-streaked papers. Behind them are several security guards and detectives, looking through the entire area. SHRIKE turns to NICO, and tries to simultaneously control his rage and his composure.

SHRIKE: How many are missing?

NICO: Um…

NICO semi-casually flips through several sheets  of paper, until he reaches the one on the end.

NICO: (Still reading) By the last count…forty two assault rifles…three light man-portable missile launchers, eighty five small pistols, about three magazines to each of the above listed weapons, two thousand rounds of seven point seven two millimeter ammunition, one thou—

SHRIKE holds up his hand to cut NICO off. Massaging his temples with his thumb and pointer finger, he sighs.

SHRIKE: Enough to arm a small army…who on Hard Light would want that much firepower—

It is now SHRIKE’s turn to be interrupted, as a shout from one of the guards behind him cuts him off.

GUARD: Sir!

SHRIKE looks up and turns around, and he and NICO walk towards the GUARD, who is standing next to SANDWICH’s locker, holding the now mangled lock in his outsretched hand. He shows it to SHRIKE, and points at the locker behind him.

GUARD: I found this on top of this locker sir. I thought it might be of some use.

SHRIKE nods and takes the lock from him.

SHRIKE: Good work private.

GUARD: Sir!

The GUARD salutes and departs, leaving SHRIKE and NICO to contemplate this new event. NICO holds out his hand.
NICO: Shrike…?

SHRIKE hands him the lock. NICO turns it over and over, examining it.

NICO: Cut by a welding torch…a lot of work for a casual thief to go into this one specific locker.

SHRIKE nods, and NICO opens the door to the locker. It bangs against an adjoining door gently. The pair peer inside. SHRIKE looks around quickly, then sits back, now deep in thought.

SHRIKE: A vandalized locker with only one thing missing…

NICO: The Hammer of Justice.

SHRIKE nods again.

SHRIKE: No member would steal a slammer. As soon as they pulled it out, they’d be jumped on…plus, there’s at least five things in here that are worth almost triple.

NICO taps his fingers against the locker.

NICO: You thinking of who I’m thinking of?

SHRIKE: Sandwich…but why?

NICO: Power hungry, obviously.

SHRIKE: No…I know Sandwich, he wouldn’t do this to just gain control. There’s got to be something else…

NICO: I’ll look into it. In the meantime, I have to get down to DF headquarters and get them to put out notices about Sandwich. We can’t have someone like him running around without any checks. He’s too dangerous.

SHRIKE manages a weak smile and nods. NICO salutes and turns, exiting the room, leaving SHRIKE standing alone in front of the locker. Fade to:

SCENE EIGHTY THREE. INT. FORUM HEADQUARTERS – DAY.

We open to see all the admins, minus SHRIKE and GOOBER5000, seated at the table. GOOBER5000 is instead standing in front of it, making a presentation, which is indistinct to us. We focus on STYXX, leaning back in his chair lazily, glancing casually at a small computer screen in front of him. A small window appears on the lower right hand corner of the screen, and starts to flash urgently.

WINDOW: NEW TEXT MESSAGE.

STYXX leans forward and taps the screen. The window enlarges to show the message, which is remarkably short. The FROM box reads COBRA.

WINDOW: Mission complete. Defenses check out OK. Ready for action.

STYXX smiles slightly and closes the window, turning back to the presentation. We fade to:



EDIT: Typo fixes :)
« Last Edit: May 23, 2005, 05:55:17 am by 368 »

 

Offline phreak

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7.76mm ammo?  what an odd caliber.  7.62 is more realistic.

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Corrected typo 1/3rd of the way down, a SANDWICH/SHRIKE switcharoo. ;)

Good stuff! Better than Lucas, for sure. :p
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"...The quintessential quality of our age is that of dreams coming true. Just think of it. For centuries we have dreamt of flying; recently we made that come true: we have always hankered for speed; now we have speeds greater than we can stand: we wanted to speak to far parts of the Earth; we can: we wanted to explore the sea bottom; we have: and so  on, and so on: and, too, we wanted the power to smash our enemies utterly; we have it. If we had truly wanted peace, we should have had that as well. But true peace has never been one of the genuine dreams - we have got little further than preaching against war in order to appease our consciences. The truly wishful dreams, the many-minded dreams are now irresistible - they become facts." - 'The Outward Urge' by John Wyndham

"The very essence of tolerance rests on the fact that we have to be intolerant of intolerance. Stretching right back to Kant, through the Frankfurt School and up to today, liberalism means that we can do anything we like as long as we don't hurt others. This means that if we are tolerant of others' intolerance - especially when that intolerance is a call for genocide - then all we are doing is allowing that intolerance to flourish, and allowing the violence that will spring from that intolerance to continue unabated." - Bren Carlill

 

Offline Unknown Target

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Here you go :) Singh's thing inspired me to write more :D
 Hope you all like.

SCENE EIGHTY-FOUR. EXT. SPACE – DAY.

We open to an asteroid field. Hundreds of colossal rocks, some kilometers in diameter, hurl past us, spinning wildly amidst each other. The star filled sky hangs placidly above, oblivious to the turmoil just within it’s reach. Eventually, a smaller rock rises into our view. We watch it for a few seconds, realizing that it is something different. As it slowly rotates over, an anomaly manifests itself on it’s pockmarked and uneven sides. The shadow slowly pulls away, revealing a small metallic object. We zoom in closer, and soon the object’s identity is confirmed as a small spaceship. As the ship fully manifests itself in our view, we cut to:

SCENE EIGHTY-FIVE. INT. KRACKERS87’S COCKPIT – DAY.

Inside the small vessel is an even smaller cockpit, bristling with equipment. Outside is the rocky landscape of the asteroid, the sky hurling about above it. KRACKERS87 sits firmly inside, strapped down by a seven point harness. He struggles to move around the tiny area. He glances up out of the cockpit, then looks down at his instrument panel. Flipping a few switches, he puts a hand to the side of his head. We cut to:

SCENE EIGHTY-SIX. INT. GRANDEUR BRIDGE – DAY.

The once-filled bridge is now almost deserted, save for a few emergency personnel manning the mission-critical stations. We pan over to the communications area, where a CREWMEMBER is sitting, reading a magazine. Except for the omnipresent hum of the ship’s machinery, all is silent, until a loud crackle breaks through the silence, as KRACKERS87 radios in. However, his transmission is so garbled his nigh-impossible to comprehend.

KRACKERS87: Thi….out…..n…..er….

The CREWMEMBER, not looking up from his magazine, leans forward, extending an arm, and depresses a button on the panel.

CREWMEMBER: This is the Grandeur to unknown transmitter. Please adjust your frequency, you’re too garbled, over.

A few seconds pass. KRACKERS87 comes through again, still distorted, but at least understandable now.

KRACKERS87: This is Lookout Five. Can you hear me now? Over.

CREWMEMBER: Affirmative, over.

KRACKERS87: Good! No activity to –

He is suddenly cut off by another voice, whom we recognize as KARAJORMA.
KARAJORMA: This is Lookout Two, no activity to report, over.

KRACKERS87: Hey! I was using this channel!

KARAJORMA: You weren’t saying anything important, so I figured I should cut in.

KRACKERS87: I was about to report in, thank you very much!

KARAJORMA: Like I was saying.

KRACKERS87: *******.

KARAJORMA: Cocksucker.

There is a small pause. The CREWMEMBER, who had finally removed his gaze from the magazine, was now staring at the console with a puzzled expression. He leans forward again to speak, but is suddenly cut off by KRACKERS87.

KRACKERS87: So how’s the girlfriend?

KARAJORMA: Oh, she’s ok. Wants to move to Game Warden, of all places.

KRACKERS87: (Laughs) Why?

KARAJORMA: “For the view,” she says. Yea, like I’d like to spend all day staring at some stupid planet. I’m telling you, deep space is where it’s at. You can’t beat the stars.

KRACKERS87: Yea, I hear that. By the way, have you heard anything from Gortef? I need to ask him something when I get back.

KARAJORMA: Well, I –

He is suddenly cut off by the CREWMEMBER, who had been staring at his console this entire time, his mouth open in disbelief. He suddenly regains his composure and depresses the button once again.

CREWMEMBER: (Vehemently) Excuse me, gentlemen, but this frequency is for Defense Force transmissions only. If you want to have a personal conversation, please have it another frequency, over.

KARAJORMA: Sorry sir. Over.

KRACKERS87: Sorry sir, we got a li –

He suddenly stops. The CREWMEMBER raises an eyebrow.

CREWMEMBER: Lookout Five, are you there? Over.

KRACKERS87: We have a problem.

Cut to:

SCENE EIGHTY-SEVEN. INT. KRACKERS87’S COCKPIT – DAY.

KRACKERS87 is staring wide-eyed out of the cockpit. Above his tiny asteroid, a colossal ship is moving slowly into view over the horizon. KRACKRES87 is frantically throwing switches, and as his cockpit dims, all that is left lit is the emergency consoles and his face, wide eyed with both fear and surprise.

KRACKERS87: We have movement, I repeat, we have movement. We’ve got a ship, large, destroyer, no, battlecruiser class, moving in fast, over!

CREWMEMBER: Acknowledged Lookout Two. Can anyone else confirm?

KARAJORMA: Negative on that battlecruiser, but I have multiple ship movements, ranging from cruiser to carrier class, over!

CREWMEMBER: Lookouts One, Three and Four, can you confirm?

Lookout One: Negative, no movement on this side, over.

Lookout Three: Affirmative, I have movement, over.

Lookout Four: No movement here, over.

CREWMEMBER: Affirmative, we are alerting Hard Light. Stand by Lookouts, and stay hidden, Grandeur out.

Cut to:

SCENE EIGHTY-EIGHT. INT. FORUM HEADQUARTERS – DAY.

All of the admins, which include GOOBER5000, SHRIKE, STYXX, WINDRUNNER, MAEGLAMOR, COBALTSTARR, and ADMINISTRATOR, are now seated around the table. In the middle is a large holographic display, showing each of the ships of the opposing fleet moving. GOOBER5000 is narrating.

GOOBER5000: We have confirmed reports of at least half of the enemy fleet moving, and we have – switch to infrared…

The holographic display shifts to the familiar red/yellow/blue colors of infrared vision.

GOOBER5000: Reactor blooms in seventy five percent of the remaining ships.
SHRIKE: Where are they heading?

GOOBER5000: Well, it looks like about twenty five percent of the ships that are moving have jumped into subspace, and we have lost them from sensors. However, the other seventy five percent – that’s about three hundred ships – have begun moving towards Hard Light.

MAEGLAMOR: My God…

GOOBER5000: It doesn’t end there. News of this has spread through leaks, and we have had several incidents throughout the past five days. About three threads have been locked, and we have a political topic that’s bordering on a full-fledged flame war right now.

SHRIKE: Our options?

GOOBER5000: We must, of course, deploy our own fleet to strategic positions around the station. As for the flame wars…

He gestures towards ADMINISTRATOR.

GOOBER5000: Administrator assures me that his Defense Force is well on hand to keep them under control.

SHRIKE: (Nods) Deploy the fleet. Windrunner.

WINDRUNNER: Yes sir?

SHRIKE: Start laying some quilts on this fire, get out on all the channels you can.

WINDRUNNER: Will do.

SHRIKE: Cobaltstarr. I want you to start training as many pilots as you can. Styxx, get down on the forum floor and start showing the administration as a force to be reckoned with. Gobber5000, I want you to continue monitoring the situation. Everyone clear?

As a chorus of acknowledgements go up, SHRIKE dismisses the meeting, and we fade to:
« Last Edit: May 29, 2005, 01:41:32 pm by 368 »

 

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the HLP fleet will fight Derek Smart's fleet for 14 years and then they'll join forces to fight off the Interplay lawyer fleet.
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Offline Corsair

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now there's a prediction for you.

fleet's moving out eh? *heads for ready room*
Wash: This landing's gonna get pretty interesting.
Mal: Define "interesting".
Wash: *shrug* "Oh God, oh God, we're all gonna die"?
Mal: This is the captain. We have a little problem with our entry sequence, so we may experience some slight turbulence and then... explode.

 

Offline TrashMan

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ALL HANDS TO BATTLESTATIONS!!!

*Walks out of the bunk with so much guns and ammo that he eventually gets chrushed by their weight*
« Last Edit: May 31, 2005, 03:59:32 am by 624 »
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Quote
Originally posted by TrashMan
ALL HANDS TO BALLTESTATIONS!!!
:lol:

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Quote
Originally posted by Goober5000
:lol:

*resists the urge to comment*



:wtf:

*looks*

...... :wtf:

*looks again*


.................. :wtf:


*looks real close*


:lol: :wakka: :wakka: :lol:
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"...The quintessential quality of our age is that of dreams coming true. Just think of it. For centuries we have dreamt of flying; recently we made that come true: we have always hankered for speed; now we have speeds greater than we can stand: we wanted to speak to far parts of the Earth; we can: we wanted to explore the sea bottom; we have: and so  on, and so on: and, too, we wanted the power to smash our enemies utterly; we have it. If we had truly wanted peace, we should have had that as well. But true peace has never been one of the genuine dreams - we have got little further than preaching against war in order to appease our consciences. The truly wishful dreams, the many-minded dreams are now irresistible - they become facts." - 'The Outward Urge' by John Wyndham

"The very essence of tolerance rests on the fact that we have to be intolerant of intolerance. Stretching right back to Kant, through the Frankfurt School and up to today, liberalism means that we can do anything we like as long as we don't hurt others. This means that if we are tolerant of others' intolerance - especially when that intolerance is a call for genocide - then all we are doing is allowing that intolerance to flourish, and allowing the violence that will spring from that intolerance to continue unabated." - Bren Carlill

 

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Offline TrashMan

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OK - who messed with my post?
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What you originally posted is preserved for all eternity as a quote in Goob's post, so fret not. :D
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"...The quintessential quality of our age is that of dreams coming true. Just think of it. For centuries we have dreamt of flying; recently we made that come true: we have always hankered for speed; now we have speeds greater than we can stand: we wanted to speak to far parts of the Earth; we can: we wanted to explore the sea bottom; we have: and so  on, and so on: and, too, we wanted the power to smash our enemies utterly; we have it. If we had truly wanted peace, we should have had that as well. But true peace has never been one of the genuine dreams - we have got little further than preaching against war in order to appease our consciences. The truly wishful dreams, the many-minded dreams are now irresistible - they become facts." - 'The Outward Urge' by John Wyndham

"The very essence of tolerance rests on the fact that we have to be intolerant of intolerance. Stretching right back to Kant, through the Frankfurt School and up to today, liberalism means that we can do anything we like as long as we don't hurt others. This means that if we are tolerant of others' intolerance - especially when that intolerance is a call for genocide - then all we are doing is allowing that intolerance to flourish, and allowing the violence that will spring from that intolerance to continue unabated." - Bren Carlill

 

Offline Unknown Target

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Speaking of preserved, someone should preserve this stuff :)

And what the hell are you guys talking about, anyway?
Hope you guys like, and it's not too cliche :)

SCENE EIGHTY-NINE. INT. SHRIKE’S QUARTERS – DAY.

We open to see SHRIKE, laying in his bed alone. His room is brightly lit, and he seems to be enjoying the large book spread across his lap. A small tower of tomato juice cans is piled on the nightstand next to him, another resting on his stomach. He takes a sip, then sets it back down again. The TV is playing softly in the background.
Suddenly, his quiet sanctuary is immediately destroyed by the obnoxious beeping coming from his comm. Link. Sighing slightly, he sets his drink down and stands up. When he reaches it, he tosses his book on the table and depresses a button.

SHRIKE: Shrike here…

BLACK WOLF’s voice, slightly distorted from the radio, comes through.

BLACK WOLF: Sir, it’s BLACK WOLF. STYXX is pinned down in General Freespace, and requests your immediate assistance.

SHRIKE: Can’t anyone else handle it?

BLACK WOLF: Negative sir, he specifically asked for you. Looks like another Freespace Three thread went awry and he’s taking heavy fire.

SHRIKE: Alright…I’ll be down in a minute.

SHRIKE releases the button, and turns around, starting for the door. Grabbing a tactical vest off the back of a nearby chair, he reaches the door and swiftly picks up a Hammer of Justice off of a nearby table. The door whooshes shut behind him, and we cut to:

SCENE NINETY. INT. GENERAL FREESPACE – DAY.

The forum is in total and complete chaos. Bullets are whizzing through the air, and forum members are scrambling for whatever cover they can find. We pan to find STYXX and a small contingent of Defense Force members, pinned down behind the bar. Many of them are wounded or dead, and the few surviving members are concentrating on simply surviving. As bullets impact all around them, they send glass shards from the bottles raining down on their heads. STYXX is frantically treating to a wounded comrade, until a sudden burst of gunfire catches him in the shoulder. Screaming out loud, he draws an enormous pistol and, leaping back from the front bar table, he lets loose a hail of bullets through it. One of the rounds catches an enemy in the leg, sending him reeling to the ground, his gun tracing a semi-circle of bullets into the air. One of the soldiers turns to STYXX, screaming out his question in adrenaline-fueled fear.

Soldier: Sir! Where’s that backup?

As if to answer his question, the front door to the forum bursts open, and in steps SHRIKE, a small legion of Defense Force troops in tow. Pointing his arm at the enemy troops, SHRIKE lets it drop, and the force opens fire. Enemies are cut down left and right, yet still more manage to take shelter behind a myriad of forum objects, and return fire. SHRIKE ignites his Hammer of Justice, raising it high over his head.

SHRIKE: Charge!

SHRIKE takes off, his Defense Force members in tow behind him. As they rush forwards, STYXX yells to his comrades, ushering them forward. The enemy, unable to cope with the combined charge, is quickly overrun. The two forces engage each other in close combat, SHRIKE and STYXX leaping into the fray. STYXX’s wounded arm hangs loose at his side as he charges into battle with only his pistol. The first flamer he sees, he lets loose with his pistol, clubbing him over the head, sending him into a sideways spin to the floor. Finishing him off with a round to the head, he spies his next target. His next opponent tries to club him over the head with his rifle butt, whereupon STYXX narrowly dodges it, shoving his pistol barrel in the enemy’s stomach. He fires, the forumite slumping to the floor, dead. SHRIKE meanwhile is letting fly with his Hammer of Justice. With mighty swings, he clears several forumites at a time from his path. As one tries to cut him down with automatic gunfire, SHRIKE pulls his Hammer up in front of him, skillfully deflecting the bullets in several directions. One catches the forumite in the stomach, doubling him over. SHRIKE lets a giant back swing go, sending his enemy into the air, landing him several feet away. Suddenly, STYXX comes into view. SHRIKE rushes to him.

SHRIKE: Heard you needed some help!

STYXX quickly dispatches an enemy, then turns to SHRIKE.

STYXX: You got here just in time!

SHRIKE: (Grins) We’ll help you guys finish up!

STYXX: (Smiles) We’d be much obliged!

The two slam up against one another, back to back, SHRIKE wielding his mighty hammer with a skillful determination, STYXX dispatching foes left and right. SHRIKE begins to move off, fighting off several opponents at once. STYXX turns to watch him go, and pauses. Smiling slightly, he raises his pistol towards his former friend.

STYXX: Shrike!

SHRIKE turns towards him. When he sees the pistol, his face becomes confused, his mouth dropping open.

STYXX: (Shrugs) Sorry.

STYXX fires a single round into SHRIKE’s chest. He touches the wound, still very much in shock at the blood creeping down his battle-worn hands. STYXX begins to approach him, firing shot after shot into him. SHRIKE reels backwards with each shot, still standing. He stumbles backwards a few more feet, and just as STYXX is closing in for the kill, an opposing forumite slams into STYXX, throwing him off for just a second. STYXX is furious, and grabs the forumite around the neck, snapping it like a twig. As he returns his gaze to where he last left SHRIKE, he finds that he has disappeared. Running to SHRIKE’s former location, he looks around frantically. Something on the floor catches his eye, and he stoops to pick it up. As he stands, we see he is holding SHRIKE’s Hammer of Justice now dormant Hammer of Justice in his hand. As he looks around, we cut to:

SCENE NINETY-ONE. INT. GENERAL FREESPACE MAINTENANCE PASSAGES – DAY.

We find SHRIKE, stumbling blindly through the darkened corridors. His breathing is the only noise in this silent hallway, save the ever ongoing hum of the machinery. He stops to rest on a railing, and looks at his wounds, which are now bleeding profusely. Slumping to his knees, his breathing grows raspier and heavier. Just as he is about to lose consciousness, a robed figure approaches him out of the shadows. He reaches towards him, and we cut to black.
« Last Edit: June 05, 2005, 01:51:08 am by 368 »

 

Offline TrashMan

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Uuuuuu..... I like it! I like it!

UT, you're a genius! MORE!
Nobody dies as a virgin - the life ****s us all!

You're a wrongularity from which no right can escape!