[Reaper]

In the disturbed heart like mine,
there is no more place for evil.
Only love is what I feel.
Only love is what I dream.

Once cold and decayed heart
is warming and patching up.
Now i belive in love and light again;
cos an angel is here,
looking after me
and loving me

I know now what love is;
it's the sweetest feeling that exists.
It feels nice to love
and even nicer to be loved

Written:
10.09.2002
by Jaka "Reaper" Markelj

What do you all think?

[Tiara]

Liking it

[Warlock]

hmmm sudden urge to go into other room and wrap my arms around my GF


Very nice poem

[Reaper]

Thank you tiara and warlock:nod:

[Sandwich]

The use of "cos" instead of "cause" adds an interesting... flavor, methinks.

[demon442]

its soft.  no offence, but i hate it.

[JBX-Phoenix]

Im sorry but why do people post something if they dont like something.  

IF YOU DONT LIKE IT, DONT POST ANYTHING.

Its beautiful IMO.

[demon442]

Originally posted by JBX-Phoenix
Im sorry but why do people post something if they dont like something.  

IF YOU DONT LIKE IT, DONT POST ANYTHING.

He asked what we think, I told him.

[Scorpius]

Good job, dude. Did you have any reason to write this or was it just a spur of the moment?

[CP5670]

I personally dislike any kind of poetry and of all poetry I despise love poetry the most, but I suppose it is quite good for what it is.

[Reaper]

Originally posted by Scorpius
Good job, dude. Did you have any reason to write this or was it just a spur of the moment?

I have a reason... LOVE!! It made meturn all upside down :/

Demon, i appritiate your honesty:D

[Cannikin]

Erm, guess it's ok except I have no idea about the concept (yes I'm a loner and prob will die an old, single geezer ).

I personally hate poetry, and ESPECIALLY hate it when the teachers forces us to write stupid poems.

Funny thing is one time I wrote a poem about a nuke and I got an A+ for it

[Gortef]

I like... it's good

[Reaper]

Originally posted by Cannikin
(yes I'm a loner and prob will die an old, single geezer )

Don't worry... u'll have ur time

[Fineus]

Very nice, although I don't really like the use of words like "cos" in there, even thuogh it's accepted these days...

[Razor]

Reaper, you are really starting to scare me now!

[Martinus]

I like it

...and he looked to the heavens and said "How can we be alone in this universe for who would give such an infinite treasure to so few?"

That's the only piece of prose I've ever come up with that I thought was good. It just came to me one night while watching Orion, my favourite constellation.

[Reaper]

When I steeped into the light again
Something started to pull me back into the darkness
Something, that i never expected to be agenst me
I thought that they are with me all the time,

But I guess I was wrong
They don't let me be in the light,
They do bad things to me
and they don't even know that they do them

I think that don't want me to love
Even if I try to think,
that they love me, I can't
I just didn't know, that my parents are so EVIL until today...


Written:
11.09.2002
by Jaka "Reaper" Markelj

My parents got me very angry today... So, i dedicate this song to them:devil:

[Sandwich]

Originally posted by Maeglamor

...and he looked to the heavens and said "How can we be alone in this universe for who would give such an infinite treasure to so few?"

That's the only piece of prose I've ever come up with that I thought was good. It just came to me one night while watching Orion, my favourite constellation.[/B]

I like it. :wink: